Our love was new
To me ,you were true
I loved you with all my heart
For us It was a great start
Those chilly winter mornings
I still remember those cuddlings
The way you held my hand ,to help me Cross the road
The way Your eyes searched for me across the crowd
But I don’t know what happend
Love faded or you have changed
I wish everything could remain same
“Things won’t work out ” all you said
I begged, I cried ,I ached with pain
Its been months and now I know
Loosing you was indeed a gain
still it hurts sometimes though
I ‘ll make through it ,that I know
still it hurts sometimes though
PS: my first attempt at poetry ,but couldn’t hold back from sharing with you guys 🙂
Very well expressed
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BTW, forgot to say, no one would say it is your first attemp! Great debut!
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Hahahaha,thanks a lot 🙂 🙂
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Really beautiful poem, with Well expressed feelings most readers can relate to. It touched me making me wish the healing of the broken heart experiencing this feelings
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Thank you so much for such kind words 🙂 🙂
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You’re welcome
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Check out my post “we met again”
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Depending on your interest ,suggesting you 🙂
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Yeah, i won’t forget to check it out. Thanks for the hint. 😄
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🙂 🙂
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wonderfully sad – thanks for reading and following – i look forward to doing the same with your words – best, beth
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Thanks beth 🙂
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That was nice
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Thanks 🙂 ,glad you liked it
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It’s beautiful, very beautiful indeed.
Loved, words, expression and emotions.
Love and pain are one , the same energy with different out look.
You did wonders !
All the very Best looking for more !
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Hey thanks a lot 🙂 ,really grateful your detailed feedback .You made me smile thanks
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Pleasure is all mine , glad connecting !
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That’s lovely 🙂
Would be great if you could check out my blog if and when you find the time.
https://unreeltheflipside.wordpress.com/
Keep posting 😀
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Sure :),i ll be soon checking it ou
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Really lovely
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Thank you 🙂
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You have presented it beautifully
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Thanks dear 🙂
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MOst wel
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You are very good at first attempt itself ! 👏😃
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Oh! thank you so much 🙂
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You are welcome 😃
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This is such a good post, can’t believe that’s your first attempt! Looking forward to reading more of your blog, hope you’ll check out/follow mine https://myhappycornerblog.wordpress.com 🙂
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Sure i ll do ,i keep checking it
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Hope you find love again! 🙂
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I have nominated you for the black cat, blue sea award for more information please check my blog…😊
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Hey thanks dear 🙂 ,Will check it out .
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Welcome..☺
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And in case if I won’t b able to participate please accept my apologies in advance 🙂
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It’s ohk inform me, I will nominate someone else..
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🙂 a bit tight schedule these days
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I understand…don’t forget to inform..😊
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written beautifully..
shreyans
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Thanks shreyans 🙂
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You made me want you back… Lol
Great job
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I guess you never stop hurting. Once in a while the heart gives that dull ache and you know the wounds are still there. This is a great poem 🙂
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Thanks Zee 🙂
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Beautiful – captures the awfulness of heartbreak & then the bittersweet moment when one realizes it was for the best.
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Thank you so much for expalaining it so beautifully 🙂
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Well done 👌🏻
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Thank you 🙂
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Just the fact that you attempted it and shared it says a lot on your behalf. Nothing to worry about. Experimental. Artistic and creative. Yes, keep in the practice you have skill. You don’t lack imagination. Look at the response you elicited from the bloggers. A great response. Excellent work.
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Thank you
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Very beautiful writing, superb in every way
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Thanks dear
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You’re welcome
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☺️ Your 1st time poetry touched me somewhere, reminded me of something, made me emotional. It was great. Really. Keep it up.
Do read my posts also. They are pretty sad ones though.
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Yeah sure,will do 🙂
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The pain you can’t even describe. 💔
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“Things won’t work out ” all you said
“I wont deserve you:, he added
did the added line relieve your pain dear..?
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Awwww ,thank you akhila for the kind gesture 🙂
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i wonder who is the broken heart behind this wonderful poem..
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Hahaha,and what made you wonder so akhila .I mean what if i say its just fiction?
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i dont think it to be a fiction…anyway, if you say that, i have to believe you
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Well ,I hope you picked up the hint :p
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it’s difficult to call you ‘unsaid words’..do you mind saying your name..
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Offcourse not dear ,this is Anamika
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Hahaha
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anyway, it was nice to meet you anamika..
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Same here akhila 🙂
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Excellent!
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Thank you Mariam 🙂
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Dear its beautiful:),the way you hold my hands and the way your eyes searched for me across the crowd I can relate. v touching:)
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Thank you so much 🙂
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My pleasure:)
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🙂 🙂
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Is this fiction or real.. U have expressed it so beautifully
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Well ,not exactly real but inspired from reality 🙂
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but then I loved the way u have felt the pain and written it
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Oh thanks a lot for your words of appreciation :).Does it seem to be real ??
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absolutely.. if a reader is able to feel and imagine what you write, your purpose is served. and that’s what I experienced reading your post dear
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Thanks for such lovely feedback ,You made my day 🙂
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This is perfect Anamika.. I am so glad that you wrote this.. Your poem tells a story that I can relate to.. Oh, it brings back memories.. Just superb.. keep writing
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Oh ,you liked it ? This is first time i wrote something poetic
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I LOVED it
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Awwww,thank you 🙂
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your welcome… keep writing..
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That’s really nice for a first attempt. Well done! 🙂
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Hahaha ,I hope you are not saying this just to keep my heart
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No not at all. It’s great really.
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Well In that case ,thanks a lot for encouragement ,I really need this 🙂
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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😦
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Lot of pain in your words, but I guess addressing it as True Love would not be inappropriate!☺
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First attempt
Your a natural…
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Do you really think so ,oh I thought its lame
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Your at 100% as it is right now. Imagine if you keep going, you will be better than perfect.
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