Birds were
returning home
sun hid somewhere
in the clouds
And I sat there
watching
dusk turning to dawn
while my heart ached
furthest away
longing for unknown,
gazing stars,
triggered within me
a distant yearning,
for places
I have never been
and the sunrise that morning
witnessed my whole being
entrapped in a feeling of
“fernweh”
So beautiful. ❤
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Thank you 😊
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I adore the images you created here..
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you never fail to make smile, thank you ❤🤗
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Such a lovely poem to go along with the beautiful picture ❤️ and thanks to you, I learned something new today.
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कुछ तो छूट रहा है😋
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haha achha mujhe bhi lag rha
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शेष भाग की प्रतीक्षा करूंगा🙏
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Ji koshish rahegi 😊❤
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हार्दिक आभार🙏🙏🌼🌼
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Beautiful imagery 💛
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Thank you dear ❤❤
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धन्यवाद आपका🙏
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abhi padhiye dubara choti koshish ki hai abhi thori puri lag rhi
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अवश्य बंधु🙏
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abhi padhiye main koshish ki jo incompelete lag rha tha usko pura karne ki
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आप शब्दों से बहुत अच्छा खेल रही हो👌🌺🌺
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wo thora incomplete sa lag rha tha usko thik krnr ki koshish ki hai bas
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मुझे तब भी पूर्णता दिखी थी बंधु आप ऐसे दिल से न लिजिए मैंने बस ऐसे ही कहा था। अभी तो आपने चार चाँद लगा दिया है। अद्भुत श्रृंगार अत्युत्तम कृति बंधु👌👌👌
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areey nahi mujhe ni dikhi thi ar mujhe bohot achha laga ki jo incomplete maine feel ki thi wo kisi ar ne bhi ki ni to most important line hi missing thi jis word pe maine poem likhi thi wo word hi missing thi
Thank you so much 🙏❤
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अभी तो पूर्ण हो गया बंधु। भाव भी अब उभर के आ रहे हैं। तभी तो कहा आपको आप शब्दों से बहुत अच्छा खेलती हैं। आप निःसंदेह बहुत अच्छा लिखते हैं। मैं तो बस हिंदी लेखन करता पर अंग्रेजी थोड़ी बहुत पढ़ लेता हूँ। कोई गलती हो तो क्षमा ज़रूर करिएगा। 🙏
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main bhi seekh hi rahi hu hum ekdusre ki aise hi to help kar skte hai seekhne me 🙏 kash mai bhi apki tarah hindi me itna achha likh pati 😊
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यह बात न कहिये मैं तो आपकी तरह कभी अंग्रेजी में लिख नहीं पाऊंगा पर आप मेरी तरह हिंदी बहुत अच्छा लिख सकती है। आप प्रयास करिये। मैं अवश्य पढ़ना चाहूंगा। 🌼🌼
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Koshish rahegi
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इंतजार रहेगा🙏
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I can imagine you sitting somewhere and observing this.
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yeah one of my favourite things to do and yet it sometimes triggers a distant yearning❤
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Yes, you do right.
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Loved it 💕💕
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thank you 😊
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most welcome 🤗😊
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🌻💓
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❤❤
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This made me smile.:)
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What better compliment could I get? This made me happy ❤
Thank you😊
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Hugs!
🙂
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🤗🤗
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