Her own people were consuming her heart ,mind and soul by pushing her down.
And making her feel like a clown
by telling her
she is not worth the appreciation
She is insane
Her efforts are going into vain
that she is not enough
That she can’t do this and that
She chooses to stay mum
not beacause she doesn’t have a voice to oppose
to confront and look into the eyes
and say who are you to tell me
what should I want
what should I do
What I can’t and what can I do
why can’t you just keep quite
If you have nothing good to say .
if words of encouragement and appreciation
are that hard to escape
from your mouth
critisicim is so naturally
coming out
making me feel that I am not good enough
and giving that expression what have you done
Just to satisfy your insecurities
To get that peace ,
you get from pulling me down
To make yourself believe that there is someone who is not as good as you are
But let me tell you one thing
I am not here to compete
then why are you making me feel like a fool for my efforts
really?? does that make me a fool ??
Trying again and again
Without thinking about the consequence??
But she burried all those questions
she chooses to reply with her actions
You know what she believes in??
She believes in sitting down and helping someone to get on their feet ,even if she can’t walk properly .
She believes that someone
improves better and by double pace when you encourage them even for their not so perfect and polished work
When you help them to believe that they are doing their best and that things only get better with time.
She believes that for herself too
To pick herself up
To brush that dirt off
And try again
until she succeed
To tell herself that she is going to get better at whatever she chooses to do
she will keep doing it no matter how tough it turns out to be ,its going to get better only.
Thank you for sharing this. Your words really hit home for me. I honestly can’t think of anything else intelligent to add except thank you.
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That’s really kimd of you .We often come across people who try to make us believe that we aren’t enough.But it hurts the most when they are the people you consider your own.
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That’s true. You’d hope that they’d be right there supporting you, but that’s not always the case. To get where you want to go, you’ve got to ignore those naysayers and believe in yourself. It’s your life, not theirs. Thanks again!
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So beautiful!
If jealousy wasnt there and everybody appreciated others’ efforts, world would’ve been so better and beautiful!
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Yeah that’s true thank you so much 🙂 🙂
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Great write indeed, loved the way you have expressed rightly.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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It’s my pleasure
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super !
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Thank you 🙂
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true… it is easy to criticize while we need to have our eyes opened while saying word of appreciation..
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Thanks akhila and you are looking very pretty in this dp:) 🙂
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ha.. thanks anamika..hmm, i should have changed it earlier…;) lol
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Hahahha well you looked pretty in that pic too
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😉
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Beautiful and great use of words
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Hey..your writings are really beautiful and I am happy to follow your blog.
I’ve nominated you for Three days, Three quote Challenge. I really hope to read your favourite quotes. 😊
http://pratibha23rana.wordpress.com
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🙂 thank you so much for the nomination,will definitely try to participate .
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👍😊
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🙂 🙂
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Clap! Clap! So very powerful! Keep going relentless!
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Oh thank you so much 🙂 🙂
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Wow!! Very inspiring. . Love the flow of words too. . it’s better to help someone rather than pushing down someone. Life is beautiful only when we all grow as humanity together. Nice post.
Good evening. . 🙂
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Thank youb:)
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welcome.. 🙂
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The best I read today. Someone said pick up the stones thrown by the critics and build a monument. It takes character to encourage and appreciate for there are many to mock and criticize but then there will ne haters and u will have to forge ahead besides this
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Thanks. a lot for reading and understanding that I am not talking about those constructive criticism but about who is in the name of criticism spread hatred and negativity 🙂
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I got the very essence of it dear. U have crafted it so well ..
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Thank you so much 🙂 🙂
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Really beautiful and motivating. 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂 🙂
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🙂
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This is so nice!
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Thanks Aanchal ,glad you liked it 🙂 🙂
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beautiful poem. sure, it will only get better! cheers
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Cheers 🙂 🙂
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There are seriously too many critics, but none of them would non-interfering let alone encouraging.
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Yes thats true healthy criticism is something we all need .What we don’t need is constantly pulling down in the name of criticism 🙂 🙂
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I agree 100%
These are the people who pull you down since they cannot come up to your stature.
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Agree 100% with your vision… thank you for breaking down this so wisely
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Thank you for reading and understanding 🙂
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it’s amazing.Strong message
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Thank you so much 🙂 🙂
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🙂 welcome
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Wowwwww….itna sundar kese likh lete ho yar..👌👌👌👌
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Dhanyawaad Dheeraj ,ap sabko dekh kar seekhane ki koshish kar rahi rahi hu 🙂 🙂
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Oh teri tb to aaj party krni padegi mujhe…😂😂…ur welcome always…😊😊
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HahahAha ,bilkul 🙂 🙂 go ahead
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Write in hindi…i strongly believe tum bht accha likhogi…😊😊
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Yes sure I will try but hindi me kavi likha ni to isliye thra muskil hain but still will give it a try 🙂
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U r a beautiful writer.u.’ll make milestones there…blessings😊😊😊👍
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Thanks a lot 🙂 🙂 ,so are you
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😊😊
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Great words 💐
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Oh thank you so much 🙂 🙂
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Thanks for sharing this poem. I liked it. Very motivating.
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Thank you so much glad you liked it 🙂 🙂
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great quote and i love your poem –
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Hey thanks a lot dear ,it’s not about the people who genuinely gives you constructive criticism rather its about them whose intention is making you feel down .No matter how hard you try they will always pick up your flaws .
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You are such a motivator !!
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That is so kind of you 🙂 ,thanks a lot
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Apt picture says it all and your poem was saying it all. In life we have many critics but very few who will encourage us. Never mind keep on doing what best suits like. Good post.
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Thank you so much 🙂
Though nothing personal bit still thanks for your encoragment.
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You’re always welcome friend.
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Beautiful, thanks for sharing!
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My pleasure 🙂 ,glad you liked it
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