But It was not the same
Neither did you hold my hand
Nor did I embrace your cheeks
You didn’t pull me towards yourself
I didn’t melt in your arms
It was not a passionate meet
But it was indeed a compassionate meet
We didn’t talk countless things
But our eyes kept indulging in silent conversation
Our lips didn’t meet but
Our heart continued its music of rythmic beat
This time in sync
Our hands reached out for each others
But stumbled at the touch of the fingers
I had nothing to say ,
fell short of words
The girl who can’t stop blabbering
Had kept her mouth shut
You wanted to listen
Unlike all those days
When you loved me for being silent
And shut me up when I had something to say
No matter who left
May be it was not meant to be
Thats why we had to separate
I choose not to complain
Not to argue
Not to fight this time
For you are my love and will always remain so
For you might not be in my life
But will always preserve you in my heart
For I got to know love sometimes reflects in letting go
May be we will meet again at the horizon
Where the mountain and clouds meet
But just for a while ,
within seconds wind sway away the clouds making it disappear
and the one who saw them together
feels as if it was just an illusion
Yes we will meet again
But only to go our different ways
Glorious! Just glorious!!!!! 🙂
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Thank u so much
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Painful
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This is a brilliant composition. A perfect poem. Liked it. 🙂
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Thank you so much
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You can never go wrong celebrating love. Thank you for your words and for reading mine. I appreciate the follow.
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Thanks for connecting ,keep in touch 🙂 🙂
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Of course! Thank you for reading my words. It is always a honor when someone does.
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Yeah thats true 🙂 🙂 😀
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Beautiful poetry and thank you for the follow. It’s nice to meet you.
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Same here 🙂 🙂
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Beautiful 👍🏼
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Absolutely beautiful!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Thank you for this post you allowed to read….. It came at a so very right time….. Relating to it only difference I am the boy instead of the girl but it is harsh reality to be accepted and I have somehow now….
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Thank you for reading 🙂 🙂
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lovely……
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Thank you 🙂
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😃😃😃
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This brought tears to my eyes. So poignant. Sometimes letting go is the only way to preserve a love like that. Very beautiful.
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Thank you so much dear 🙂 🙂
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You’re welcome ☺️
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I feel each word,each line,the pain,I wish for none:(
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Same here crystal
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U believe or not,I actually started writing a draft about it,then I thought I dnt want to write about the pain so I wrote about tecnology.lot happnd in life.now really I understood concept of love.love is not always about holding on,its sometimes about letting them go for their happiness.
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I will believe ,as already had a proof that we think similar:)
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Dear,this is my feeling now,how we are going through same things alike:(
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😦 😦
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Pretty
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Thank you
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So many layers – wonderfully profound – thank you! Sometimes there’s good in bad, bad in good…
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Thank you so much for analyzing so well
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Ughhh
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You didn’t like it??
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No! I did. It just really pulled at some things I would rather have left alone. So I loved the writing, your writing, just not the truth of it
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I get it 😦 😦
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Fantasticaly said,, very well done 👌
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Welcome 💐
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You describe the emotions in a breathtaking way. Your story and the feelings reminded me of a personal story…the last time i met a woman that meant so much to me… So i understood and felt deep in my heart what is in your writing and in the heart of the character who feels like that in this poem. Such stirring feeling reading this. Thank You
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Thank you so much for your kind word 🙂 🙂
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Superb. I was half expecting the post to end with love for mountains after seeing the picture. Damn good
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Hehehe ,hope you liked the use of mountain pic
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Being a nature fanatic, can’t deny
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🙂 🙂
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Hi there – have wandered through your writing, some great titles there, some great stories, thanks for following my blog, I appreciate it. Good luck on your path, and great endeavour with your blog, well done Poli
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Hey poli ,thanks for your kind words dear ,Thanks gor connecting .Keep in touch 🙂
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Absolutely beautiful
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Thank you so much 🙂 🙂
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can i ask you a question?
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Yes please
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when did you started this blog ,how long have to been here
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19 th August was my first day 🙂
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ahh nice
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and how did you managed to get such a huge amount of followers.am i missing something ?
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Do you post your links to community pool which comes up every monday 🙂 .Do check it out and drop your latest blog post link there
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ok i’m gonna go there and post it
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🙂 🙂
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thanks you’re such a kind person .where are you from
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From India 🙂
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wow 🙂
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🙂
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beautiful
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Thank you 🙂
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Truly beautiful and so much emotions in your poem. Looks like you have captured every little detail in it.
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Thank you so much ,glad you liked it 🙂 🙂
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nice poem…the reality of passion and compassion!!
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Thankyu 🙂
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pleasure
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I’ve nominated you for 3 Days 3 Quotes Challenge. You have been a great source of inspiration and interest for me, so thank you. There is no obligation, but if you choose to participate here is the link https://sbdmb.wordpress.com/2016/09/25/sunset-goals/
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Thank you so much dear for you kind words 🙂 ,will definitely try to participate
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You are so welcome 🙂
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Poignantly romantic….
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Thank you
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Beautiful!!!! Loved it…
“No matter who left
May be it was not meant to be
Thats why we had to separate”
Especially fond the words above!!!!! Cheers!
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Thanks a lot 🙂 ,glad you liked it
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cheers!!! thanks for that post; those words…
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Hahahaha,my pleasure 🙂
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🙂
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The saddest story and most significant tragedy of my life…. I can relate. I can tearfully empathize … & take some of this bittersweet entry to claim for myself:(
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Awww ,my heart and words goes out for you my dear.And. m sorry for reminding those bitter sweet moments 😦 😦
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Thank you, love! It’s very fresh, but, it’s kind of nice to know that someone else can understand the feeling.
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Oh always for you 🙂
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anamika,, from a passionate meet to a compassionate meet.. good transformation
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Hahahaha ,thank you akhila.I was wondering where have you been
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you know, having some issue in reader…so struggling a bit to catch you guys..
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Hahaha,I can totally get it .I too faced last week
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is it.. might be some WP issue
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Yeah ,might be
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Well done! I felt thee emotion ❤️
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Thanks dear 🙂
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But why always different ways? Why can’t for once true lovers meet?
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Before accepting this step ,one do everything they could do to keep walking on the same way.But sometimes universe just doesn’t allow it ,and for a while you just don’t have the clue about why its happening .May be someday they will find the answers 🙂
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You may be right, but I am kind of tired now listening to these consolations and yet at the end the dear ones don’t meet.
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Thats true ,same here 😦
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Poignant
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Yes it is ,thank you
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Absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking.. this is a theme that happens to too many but this is.the first time I have seen.someone writing.on it… just loved it to the.bits.. Thanks for sharing.
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Hope ,I am improving do let me know
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You are stunning.. this one.is so beautiful my dear
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Hahahaha ,being appreciated by the one I admire means a lot .Thank you 🙂
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I.mean.every word that I said.. you are way too kind to admire me so.much.. you are so.unique in.your own writing style and I love it
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Thank you so much zigs 🙂
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Very beautifully written.. I love it
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Thanks dear 🙂
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Truly beautiful!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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You’ve captured the heartbreak. And even what went on before that, in retrospect it hung over this dead body, over the funeral pall. It takes guts to right stuff like this. I don’t know whether to continue praising or to say a prayer of safekeeping for you. Don’t misundrstand, it is just that I have no idea where you find the strength to write this. Powerful.
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remember me in your prayers ,thank you so much 🙂
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For certain. But I will also pray that you do not unnecessarily torture you self, please.
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this is amazing. Loved the flow of emotions and the way you’ve put up. 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Love is like the internet. Even though we think it is erased, it is always there…out there somewhere, but always there!
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Very true 🙂
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Emotional. 🙁 Nicely written
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Thank you puneet 🙂
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Welcome ☺️
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🙂 🙂
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Have you read my latest posts? 🙂
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Not yet ,My internet was not working properly so was bit inactive last week .Will go through the posts one by one.Thanks for reminding 🙂
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Thank you so much. No issues. Do it when you got time. 😊
Internet connection in India is seriously a joke. 😤
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I love it👍
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Thank you so much 🙂
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