There she was lying lifeless
That 14 year old’s dream were limitless
she could be anything she wanted to be
But she could only be lifeless
At the the tender age of 14
She had the enthusiasm to conquer the world
But she only could be a source
To satisfy the ego of a devil
She Became the prey of intentions so evil
He saw her
Tried to talk her
When he failed
Started to stalk her
He kept indulging in act so henious
She kept going like a tigress
The monster decided to calm down his raging ,burning harmones
By throwing acid on her
By burning her body
By ruining her face
Damaging her soul
He couldn’t disfigure her spirit
He failed to scare her
So decided to disfigure her
the wounds were visible on her body
Flashing out her bones
But the soul was suffering more
It refused to stay in a world
Where all such incidents was just a daily chore
The pain,the agony so much
that her body was numb
And kept lying there lifeless
The heaps of hopes
The collection of dreams
The stock of ambition
It was all lying there
LIFELESS
her soul is still wandering
Wrenching with tears
burning with the afflictions of injustice
The scars of violent assault is still there
no let’s not label her as “fighter ” this time
to hide the coward within ourselves
she is indeed a victim
And we all failed her as a society
Yes we failed her as a system
giving birth to more such culprits
Strengthening their belief
That they can pour acid
Disfigure the body
Damage one more life and soul
And still get away
We all are walking
Living our daily life
Laughing and talking
But deep down
The hidden sorrow
the supressed rage
That we hold back from erupting
Is only making us
Lifeless
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wow, this is fantastic work
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Thank you
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This is really very good💕💕
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Sad reality highlighted nicely.
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A powerful read addressing a very real issue, too often ignored in the face of mundane news reports.
She is a victim, but a fighter also. It doesn’t detract from her victim ‘status’, nor does it minimise her pain or the ultimate problem. But she is still a fighter. I am deeply disturbed that there are humans on this planet who seem to think this is an acceptable form of behaviour.
Very moving, well written.
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Thankew so much 🙂 ,I do agree that she is a fighter.It’s just for those who just tag her a fighter and get away with their responsibilities .They forget that she is a victim and we need to do something about it .
Thanks for reading 🙂
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This was a really touching post. Well written
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Thank you so much! I know it’s a lot on there!
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For a blogger named “Unsaid words”, you have expressed yourself in just enough said words to touch me in this post. Well done!
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Thanks a lot 🙂 🙂 ,that’s so sweet of you 🙂
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Heart-wrenching
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It’s a shameful and most regressive act one can do!! Acid attackers are not punished enough and there should be the strictest form of action taken against them! It is heartbreaking to learn of this 14yr old 😦
Such a painful thing.
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Great blog ,keep writing 🙂 🙂
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It’s saddening to hear about acidic attacks and what little law does for the victims. The point mentioned by you that we should accept them as a victims, of such a heinous crime, is spot-on. Increase in crimes against women are sky high in the recent years. It seems law needs to be more stringent towards the people guilty of such crimes.
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Yes you are correct…..
But no one takes immediate action
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Unfortunately this is happening in Indian country.
The acid attackers should be punished.
We should protect women’s….
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Yes vishal its one of those burning issues which requires immediate attention .
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Beautifully written, unfortunately acid attacks continue to happen especially to women and children. Bless them and protect them.
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Yes it still happens ,hope someday we won’t need to write about such unfortunate incidents .
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Yes you are true in what you say. We influence a thoroughfare where frustration, anger, self dissatisfaction eventually displays itself in ridiculous, callous and cowardly acts of not only retribution for our lack, for our state but also ultimately against God HImself. Acts against His Grace. But incredibly in some cases these victims are transformed. Those activities from which the world, according to what activities are trafficked among them remain dead (lifeless) but what is most remarkable is that Very God Himself is made visible, shows in the life of some of those victims. A negation of their origins, Adamic in nature but instead as if a aura, a magic can be discerned within. Chains severed, the mortal coil disengaged and a rainbow bridge transporting the Soul to the very shores of the presence of God. Duality has spoken in their story, paradox is present and so there are no worldly recognized accomplishments, but people come away from some of these individuals with the knowledge that; “I have come the closest to God I might ever come if I don’t change my perspective, my view.”
Another quizzical post from you. You lead with a purpose. Your mission is secured, stay aligned. Continue the course you are on.
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Yes ,you are right ,thank you so much for elaborating my thoughts 🙂 .
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Actually you deserve the thanks for assigning yourself such a mysterious task. And forgive, please my presumptuousness.
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Thank you so much for being so kind 🙂
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It is not I but His Love, His Spirit which permits me to appear kind. Not my doing. Deeds I can do but Life I cannot portray. I too am “lifeless”.
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🙂 🙂
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We should not teach or preach “Boys don’t Cry” instead make sure that boys learns that “they Should not make girls cry, or any human for that matter”
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Very well said josh ,We don’t need to treat our younger generation and kids the way that they feel equal .We as society unconsciously make boys feel superior and thus they can’t handle rejection and put it on their ego .Resulting in such henious crimes 😦
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Exactly. Thanks for understanding and yeah, your blogs are intense! will try to cover them all in due course.. keep writing, wishes.
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Oh thanks a lot ,keep visiting will check out yours too shortly :).
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Ahh.. Your welcome “Unsaid Words” 🙂
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Anamika 🙂 🙂
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Anamika!! nice name… Nameless !! Is that what it means ?
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Yup
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The law of this country is too weak to teach good lessons to those abominable perpetrators! I can’t understand why they are not hanged to death ….
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Thats the reason ,every other day one more culprit is born to do such henious crimes .
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acid attacks are like the new trend. Disgusted. well
portrayed.
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Yes shweta true that
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Horrible – the actions of that bastard not your writing. I cannot understand how somebody can treat another like this – it makes me angry that they can get away with it GRRrrrr!
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It do happen 😦 sad but true
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Reblogged this on AMITS WORLD.
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Thanks for the reblog
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Intriguing and touching post
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Thank you dear 🙂
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You’re welcome love
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🙂 🙂
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This is heartfelt,, quite sad..
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Yes it is ,Cezane
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I don’t know what to say. How come these type of people are alive?
The mentality of some persons are so damned. Why these people are even alive?
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😦 😦
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from comments read it as a real incident…he should be a given an acid bath..even then , will he be understanding the devilishness of his deeds..
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Yeah akhila thats true .They can roam around freely thats why no of incidents are increasing day by day .
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i wonder why these species can not overcome their unquenchable thirst..
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Don’t know akhila ,but ine thing I definitely know why they are so fearlessly attepting such hirrible crime.We preffer shutting mouth than speaking up and justice is alwaya delayed or declined
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yaa.. more actions are required..
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My heart cries tears😢. May her death never go unnoticed and her soul Rest In Peace forever.
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I wish the same laura 😦
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Terrible theme; excellent treatment
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Thank you so much 🙂
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So sad but was so touched by the story more so as it happened so recently. She will rest in peace now.
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😦 😦
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Heart wrenching and more so because it is a reality for a lot of woman. Thank you for raising your voice and using your words against this topic…I can only wish for the world and people to change for better 😦
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Yeah zee I too wish the same 😦
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Its inspired from the real incident only ,which happened last week
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Yes 😦 I hear a lot of such incidents on news, and it’s crazy to think a lot of them might have gone unreported 😦
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Yes thats an issue too ,many cases goes unnoticed
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Yeah 😟
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Very unfortunate and such coward people escape punishments
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Yeah sonali thats really unfortunate and sad 😦 😦 😦
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Painful . heinous act by such people are to be punished severely.. But then what can be done to the innocent girl when damage has already been done.. I have met few victims like this. All I could do was listen to their story , motivate a little and make them smile..
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Keep up the good work
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Uhmm
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…stupendous .
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Thanks dear ,but I wish I wouldn’t have to write this 😦
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I was going to ask the same thing as GirlfromGhana, is it based on a true story?
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Yup dear and from the same state from where ,I belong to 😦 😦
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😦 It really is upsetting that heinous act like such happen without being properly persecuted.
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This reminds me of a story I heard about just this week. Is this based on the story of the girl that was poured acid on by a guy who intended to marry her, but she as a complete fighter, overcame and succeeded as a model, I believe?
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There are numerous stories like this dear ,this one is about a 14 uear old who couldn’t survive 😦
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😦 really sad to hear that. I agree with Idle Muser, things like this are so infuriating as this man deserves to be punished!
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Thats the issue dear ,the justice is so dealyed .So many cases are still pending about the same .
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Wow is all I can say
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Thanks Daniel
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But my heart is heavy right nkw ,since this is based on a real incident
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Are you serious? What fucking animal would do something like that. Please tell me they caught them
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😦 ,not a clue Daniel
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God bless her and make them pay. In Jesus name.
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She lost her battle of life 😦
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What life she was 14. She was robbed of her life.
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Is this based on a true story? It’ll be terrible if it is.
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Unfortunately yes dear ,just recently happened
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Oh no! That’s so sad.
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😦 😦
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Exactly the topic on which I was preparing.
Rightly said, she is not a fighter this time, but a victim. Prey of a devil. A devil who needs to be punished in the most heinous way he could be. He should be made sit in a bathtub of acid, bare body. Or maybe something more worse.
My rage rises too high when such topic comes up.
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I am with you ,we do have a habit of boasting .she is a fighter not s victim ,even if she could have won the battke of life .It doesn’t change the fact that she is a v
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It doesn’t change the fact that dhe is a victim
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